Showing posts with label education. Show all posts
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Thursday, July 15, 2021

Music Next by Marty Khan

 


Reprinted from Practice Magazine

 

As a management strategist and project developer for over 45 years, it has always been my methodology to plan for both a best-case and worst-case scenario, knowing that reality will fall somewhere in between.  With that approach in mind regarding our current Covid-inflicted crisis, I believe that we have to be prepared for the possibility that we may not emerge from under its scourge. If we do, great, but if we don’t … we need to be ready for that reality. And what are some of the worst-case scenarios we may be facing? In simplest terms that in the foreseeable future:

  • Music may not be performed in front of live audiences. 
  • Earning money through live musical performance may not be possible.
  • Getting together with groups of musicians in person may no longer be viable. 

I’m not writing this to establish a definitive position. To do so this essay would need to be far longer to support and explain everything I’m saying. Rather, my purpose is to stimulate consideration and discourse as we all struggle to come to terms with a dilemma that twelve months ago was inconceivable. That said…

As we all confront variations on the theme of WTF now? – let’s pause, pull back, and take a wide-angle view to consider the inception of our personal journeys in the pursuit of music. What is it that brings a musician to that decision – and even more than that, what is their ultimate goal? 

To help answer this difficult question, let’s pose other questions. Why does one practice yoga? Or meditate; watch a meaningful film; read an impactful book; study an interesting subject; work out at the gym … and so on and so on? The common answer to all of these things is the pursuit of self-improvement and personal growth. In some cases, there is a simple goal – lose weight, build muscle, equip oneself with the knowledge to interact with someone or something that means something to you. But on the higher level, the goal is to pursue transcendence and the profound … to uplift the soul and improve one’s being in pursuit of the miraculous. 

So who the hell decided that a primary purpose of pursuing music is to make money?

Since the development of artists’ careers and opportunities has been the focus of my professional work for well over 40 years, let’s just accept that purpose as a given – for the moment.

I read a very perceptive comment a few years back by someone who suggested that rather than lament the fact that people aren’t paying for music any longer, we should appreciate how fortunate we were to get away with it for almost 100 years, because prior to that nobody ever paid for music. While that is not entirely accurate, and he was primarily referring to sale of product, the statement is meaningful in a more general way.

Prior to its commercialization, music was generally heard in parks, town squares, royal courts, places of worship, and so on. I don’t know how much it cost to go to concerts, but considering what I was paying when I came up in the ‘60s and well into the ‘70s, it couldn’t have cost too much. Part of this was due to the exploitation of the artists, and I did my part to level the playing field in the ‘80s while still keeping the costs to the consumers quite reasonable. Our policy was always whatever the market will bear. But then came the Reagan years and what I generally have referred to ever since then as The Republicanization of the Performing Arts, leading to an artificial economy that would inevitably collapse.  However, that’s a different piece for another time.

In truth, the business of jazz has been disintegrating steadily for at least thirty years. Since my focus here is particularly upon the jazz form – the butt end of the arts economy – it would seem that there wasn’t a lot of room for things to get much worse, but they really did. I’ve written extensively about the economic plummet for over twenty years – the monolithic institutions, joined at the hip to the misguided invasion of the performing arts funding world; the emergence of the promoter/venue as star; the anointment of “influential” artists by institutions rather than emerging organically from the artists themselves; the post-Reagan perversion of the profit concept – have all led to a dysfunctional economy with a polarization of fees parallel to the same 1% vs. 99% imbalance that is crippling our society. 

A simple question: is the Covid crisis essentially a disastrous disruption of a viable business for the jazz artist? Let’s consider what I wrote to all my clients and many colleagues early last year…

… we should view the current reality not as a stumbling block to overcome in order to get back into the antiquated, ineffective and user-unfriendly realm that has now been shut off, but rather as an opportunity for a more viable, productive, and rewarding new reality that may now be within our reach.  

Think of this: prior to the crisis, how many artists were even close to supporting themselves through performing – either live or through recorded product? And then, how much work is entailed in doing a small tour, or even a solitary gig, where the primary goal is often just to not lose money. Consider the work that goes into:

  • Getting the interest of a presenter (or agent)
  • Securing the gig
  • Making sure it can be viable (support gigs, overhead, etc.)
  • Locking in the personnel
  • Rehearsing the group
  • Getting there and back
  • Making sure you get your money

It’s an exhausting process … is it really worth it? And is the real fulfillment in playing the music, or is it the response of the audience? And in all honesty, are either of those two goals achieved to a really satisfactory level. In any case, an important consideration: can you achieve the purpose of expression without an audience response? If you can, that would eliminate five of the seven bullet points above. It would also mean that making the music as an ensemble would be done for the love of it. And if you have the spiritual substance for it within yourselves – in the pursuit of Transcendence. If you don’t, then in pursuit of joy. You can still share it with an audience, just not in real time. Considering the array of challenges that real-time music-sharing can pose … would that really be such a bad thing?

 

After all, we all do things that are deeply meaningful and essential to us without the added element of doing it for commercial purposes. Can’t music fall into that same domain?

Which brings us back to the yoga comparison, along with the added element of how musicians actually make their living – outside the somewhat questionable, but not terribly uncommon, approach of having your life partner work to support your artistry.

Doesn’t teaching – privately or institutionally – occupy a lot of that terrain? For some of you, that is a calling. For others, it is a necessary application to allow you to pursue the music of your heart’s desire. For many, it may be both. Why are you teaching? Is it to produce more professionals to further glut an already overburdened economic environment? Or is it more for the love of music and the positive growth and development of the student?

So … consider the yoga industry. How many facilities, teachers, and students are involved in that pursuit? Isn’t there a common purpose – a set of values that every student essentially shares? Isn’t it also clear that the private teacher and/or institution is motivated by the combined purpose of enhancing the student’s experience and making money while doing it? 

Get where I’m going here? Not fully? OK, I understand. 

Music isn’t yoga. It can’t be done by anyone with a mat and the proper apparel. Who says? Music can be done by anyone with a voice, a bucket and stick, or lips that can whistle. With a minimal investment, it can be a harmonica, a recorder or a cheap electronic keyboard. But will it be of a worthwhile quality? It’s probably best for me not to offer an opinion about what is or isn’t good music here … and that really isn’t the point.

Let’s just go with this: Music in its highest form is a spiritual quest, which if achieved successfully is an incredibly enriching, life-affirming and profound contribution to the world and every individual in it. While yoga is … well … pretty much the same, no?  And it might make sense to check in with a true yogi about that, as I assume that there may be a good deal more of them than musicians who can properly claim that same level of mastery. 

Some of the most transcendent music I’ve ever heard has been made without commercial intent and where an audience was somewhat incidental: a shehnai player with drummers at a Sufi shrine in India; Pygmy music; Gospel choirs; a Senufo trumpet choir. I often enjoyed a trombone choir that used to play in midtown NYC – they were spectacular! One day during a break I spoke to the leader and told him that I would like to bring a certain record exec with a very open mind to hear them. He thanked me but said that this wasn’t why they played music … it was just for God. 

So … imagine a world in which you have a large number of minds and souls who can benefit by exposure to your teaching and who can be connected to the incredible legacy of the music’s past immortals; where you can create music with like-minded artists for the sheer pursuit of the miraculous (or on a less ambitious level, for a delightfully good time). Where your own pursuit of mastery is for the perfection of your own being rather than a competition for the meager rewards that await most professional musicians – or the lottery of becoming one of the anointed and/or a recipient of the occasional grant or one of the bigger (and highly arbitrary) awards.

Who loses by this shift in emphasis? 

  • The world of absurdly priced higher education that sells students on a six-figure investment that is highly unlikely to ever be recouped as a professional
  • Bloated monolithic institutions with ridiculous overheads fueled by millions of dollars of squandered contributions 
  • Self-important presenters who consider themselves stars of equal magnitude to the artists upon whom they bestow the rare gig
  • Arts funding professionals whose bloated salaries far outweigh the artist recipients as they foster trickle-down economics and combat self-empowerment in order to remain the new plantation
  • Instrument companies charging incredibly high prices for their products while thousands upon thousands of instruments remain locked up in the storerooms of public schools all over the country

This all may seem a bit simplistic, but it’s all in the quest for a certain brevity. There’s far more to say … and I will. That includes an answer to those who may say that I can’t address this because I’m not a musician. 

I’ll wrap this up by re-stating something I say above: We should view the current reality not as a stumbling block to overcome in order to get back into the antiquated, ineffective, and user-unfriendly realm that has now been shut off, but rather as an opportunity for a more viable, productive, and rewarding new reality that may now be within our reach.

Peace & A Love Supreme!

Marty Khan, arts management consultant, strategist, producer. problem solver, writer, educator and more than occasional pain in the ass to fools.
Executive Director of Outward Visions. Inc. www.outwardvisions.com



Thursday, March 14, 2019

Making It Work: The Bell and The Bowl by Dushyant Rakheja



I am getting a degree because I want to make money. I am getting a degree because I want to make money. I am getting a degree because I want to make money. Call it a completely normal statement; nothing about it stands out as odd apart from the fact that I wrote it thrice. It is what we all believe, and it is flawed.



When I was seventeen-years-old, my parents allowed me to watch a movie with my friends for the first time. Feeling like the king of the world, I went to buy popcorn during the trailers. As I was waiting in line playing with the only thing in my pocket, my dad’s debit card, a thought swept over me harder than a tsunami; someday I will have to spend my own money to buy the popcorn, the movie ticket, and the water! I went back home and handed the card back to my father without any grease on my fingers. The strength of the thought threw me into such an absolute anxiety about how to earn money that I forgot to order popcorn. This lingering unease was all I could talk to my friends about for the next couple of days. Unsurprisingly, they had had the same thought way before I did and were also looking for solutions. We shared our ideas on our communal bench, the one by the window in the corner. We took down notes during lectures hoping to scientifically analyse the historical decisions made in our civic society. However, we were only young seventeen-year-old brains with no real-world experience. All the ideas that we could come up with were too simple, according to our parents. So, naturally, we turned to them for advice and learned something we would never forget.




Having gone through the same phase, my father had an exact cure to my itch: “Go to college and get a degree. If you score all ‘A’s you will earn enough riches to dwarf a small nation. Score one B and you’ll just be getting along. Anything below that and you can call the assistant because you are not worth the time” (Rakheja). That is, in closest translation, what my father said to me, just as his elder brother had stated it to him. Later when I consulted my uncle, he confessed to quoting my grandfather on that occasion. One can assume that my grandfather probably quoted somebody ancient who came before him. Going to college for money, therefore, seems like an inherent knowledge passed down through my family. By conversing with people in my classes I discovered that this knowledge is not just my heirloom; we all have it. Consider the clear indication in my roommate’s prompt reply to my questioning his major: “I am an accounting major so I can get a job as an accountant. I gotta pay the bills” (Galietta). Everybody wants to study a subject to “get a job” in that field. It has been conditioned into us like the bell and the bowl of food that was conditioned into Pavlov’s dogs.




During the 1890’s, a Russian physiologist named Ivan Pavlov conducted research in classical conditioning by examining dogs’ saliva in response to an induced stimulus (BullyingNewsVideo). He would ring a bell and give the dogs a bowl of treats. In time, the dogs started to associate the sound of the bell with the bowl of food, thus releasing happy hormones whenever the bell was rung. After a while, the dogs got elated by the mere sound of the bell even without the chow in sight, thereby being conditioned to like the chime. Using the same logic, one is conditioned to stay in crippling college debt.





There is no denying that the cost of college is increasing exponentially. Take Hofstra University, for example; their per year tuition rates went up from $20,999 (inflation adjusted) in 1998 to $43,960 in 2018. Similarly, the City University of New York’s rates went up from $5,091 in 1998 (inflation adjusted) to $17,910 in 2018 (Chronicle of Higher Education). The cost of attending each college throughout the U.S. went up almost every year of the decade. If one was to take an economist’s view, it only seems fair to raise prices. Since it is seen as an essential product (diploma) and service (learning) by the people, they are bound to indulge in it. As Thomas Frank notes in “The Price of Admission,” “An annual pass to Disneyland would also cost $54,000 if society believed that what it took to make you eligible for success was a great many hours spent absorbing the subtle lessons of the Finding Nemo Submarine Voyage” (par. 5). Even so, it is not necessary for the bowl of crippling debt to follow the bell of college. The bowl that leaves a student crying on their floor eating ice cream while re-watching the same Disney movie for the 19th time is avoidable. Alas, my strolls through campus and its neighborhood have pointed out that we do not want to evade it!




Every person I know would love to have less debt, but they are not willing to work. Obviously, they want a job, but they desire the immediate rags-to-riches story because they want to be Princess Diana. Nobody notices the “Help Wanted” signs posted in the windows of shops that are within a ten minute walking radius of the campus as they are too busy shining their tiaras. My own roommates, who have more debt than I do. would rather make fun of me for waking up at 6:00 am to go to work than get off their Playstation and work alongside me. By lounging around and complaining about not having enough money or required job experience afterwards, we allow our comfort zone to become a limiting threshold. Certainly not everyone may want to be waiting tables til midnight, but I have also seen a “We are Hiring” poster outside the same Target Superstore for the past month. These are not jobs that pay $250 or $300 an hour as we would like them to, but it is still progress--- the building block of human society. These $7 or $8 per hour jobs keep us from being monkeys with suits and ties hanging in our wardrobes. Everybody seems to be so content with being in the state of having debt that they forget what being human is.




Slow progress over centuries is what led humans to rule the food chain. It is these increments, i.e., low paying jobs, that will continue to lead our march towards the top. It is not as easy as going out with our paper degree, handing it over the counter, and coming back with money as if we are buying bread from a grocery store. It involves long hours of collecting small slices that will eventually bundle up to a big loaf (Farquharson). Not only is it about small slices, but American citizens can make their college lives easier in big sums---even if they do not have an academic scholarship!


The ROTC program at most universities is available for anyone with an average GPA of 2.4. The program’s recruiting officer at Hofstra University also mentioned that there are scholarships that can amount to half the cost of tuition (Massidas). Since room and board amount to the second highest cost contributor in college, Hofstra, like many American universities, provides free room and board to active ROTC members. This is just one way to cut down college cost without being an academic or athletic genius. All it takes is a little snooping around.



Amidst all this “give me what I want because I want it” mindset that we carry, the go-getter sense has been lost. The sooner one realizes that they cannot beam up to the rich life, but rather will have to put in some effort, the closer they will be to their American dream. I am an international student from a middle-class family who is not allowed to work in America. However, while nobody was looking, I was able to add two slices to my bread fund. If I could, that means native-born Americans do not look closely enough. Are we letting opportunities pass us by because we are blinded by the end goal? There is a treacherous track we must tread before reaching the ribbon. As the product of our parents’ money, having almost nothing to our name, why should we be afraid to start from level negative one? We have got to stop getting happy at the sound of the bell and go look for the bowl.


Works Cited


BullyingNewsVideos. “Classical Conditioning – Ivan Pavlov.”  YouTube, 13 Sep. 2008, https://youtu.be/hhqumfpxuzI.

Chronicle of Higher Education, The. “Tuition and Fees, 1998-99 Through 2017-18.” Chronicle, 28 Nov. 2017, https://www.chronicle.com/interactives/tuition-and-fees.

Farquharson, Tajear. Personal interview. 10 Nov. 2018.

Frank, Thomas. “The Price of Admission.” Thomas Frank. Harper’s Magazine, Jun. 2012, Web. 16 Nov. 2018, https://www.tcfrank.com/essays/The_Price_of_Admission

Galietta, Noah. Personal interview. 1 Mar. 2018.

Massidas, Wilfred. Personal interview. 5 Nov. 2018.

Rakheja, Anand. Personal interview. 1 Aug. 2015.

Sunday, February 11, 2018

“The Kids Are the Didgeridoo: A Musical Study of Society in WALKABOUT” by Brittany McGowan




Nicolas Roeg’s Walkabout is a story not only of survival but a story of cultural solidarity, clashing societies, and lack of knowledge. His film is full of extreme symbolism and representation moving from the music to the characters to the societies they are from.


The film opens up with a montage of the two main wealthy, privileged, white, British children going about their daily routine: toys and mindless vocal lessons held up by the long, unsettling blare of the didgeridoo. The low, loud hum sets the wild tone of the overall film and foreshadows the coming events the children will experience. A common practice in film, the opening music establishes the feel of the film as a whole: unsettling. The native Australian instrument does not, however, match up with the film imagery of the opening montage, which then foreshadows the cultural differences between the two children and the Aboriginal boy later in the film. The montage would match up better with music that establishes the everyday hustle-and-bustle of privileged children rather than the ominous hum of the Outback. The didgeridoo is out of its habitat.


When the children go on their picnic, they bring a radio. The radio is playing modern music in the middle of the desert. The music, although matching with the picnic, does not match the barren desert surroundings. As the children head deeper into the Outback, choral music plays as the camera zooms out to a wide shot of the dry landscape. Much like the didgeridoo and the opening sequence, the calm choral music featuring the voices of children mentioning finding the light does not match up with the gravity of the situation that the siblings have gotten themselves into. A few minutes later in the film, the children climb to the top of a mountain to try and see where they are. At this point, uplifting orchestral music begins. The score initially matches up with the shots of the view, but after some thought, the audience remembers again that these young children are lost in the Australian wilderness with nothing except for some toys, a radio, limited food leftover from the failed attempt at a picnic, and their uniforms. Uplifting orchestral music might be enhancing the beauty of the view, but it is fighting the dangers in the story.


The music in the film has a habit of not corresponding with its scenery or situation that it should be enhancing. In a way, the music represents the children. The grumble of the didgeridoo is extremely out of place in the urban environment it was introduced in. In the wilderness, the choral and orchestral scores do not match up with the dangers of the wilderness, thus showing cultural separations. The children, with the radio, have their own music, appearing very out of place. In the desert, the children are out of their natural urban environment with their lack of survival skills and dress shoes. The music turns the story completely over from the opening montage to the rest of the film. The children become just as out of place as the didgeridoo in the city. The music represents one of the many cultural and societal differences in the film.


The didgeridoo is the oldest wind instrument known to mankind. “Researchers have suggested it may be the world's oldest musical instrument, over 40,000 years old” (“Didgeridoo Facts”). Throwing this instrument in to support footage of then-modern society immediately shows how drastic the differences in the film will be. Once the situation is flipped, with orchestra, choral, and modern radio music supporting the native Australian desert, the music supports the children, enhancing how out of place they are. The children go through their journey with no survival skills. They are modern people paired with an ancient civilization. “Australia’s Aboriginal civilization is the oldest on the planet, dating back some 50,000 years” (Klein). This film takes the two most societal extremes and makes them work together. Unfortunately, these two societies and habitats do not know how to work together. The teenage girl, who takes a leadership position trekking across the desert, has hardly any survival skills and no knowledge of how to attempt to communicate with the Native.


The older sister, not really having made any drastic survival errors since the decision to run deeper into the desert (which got the two into the mess that is the rest of the film), makes her first mistake. As the two children are sitting down, taking a break, the young boy mentions that he is hungry. His sister tells him that he should eat salt. She claims to have gotten that idea from her uncle, who ate salt in the army. The mistake is that salt is a solute. Now, the girl’s uniform indicates that the school she goes to is private and expensive. Generally, these schools have a good academic standing. Such schools would also teach their students that eating salt will cause them to become dehydrated, even though it should be common sense. Most children know that if they were to pour salt on a snail or slug it would cause the creature to shrivel up and die because the salt extracts the moisture. The young boy, of course, eats the salt. In the next scene, the boy appears to be rendered unconscious; most likely due to a combination of the lack of food, overexposure to intense sunlight, and lack of water with too much salt. This is the first real indication that her prestigious education has taught her not much that is of use.


Within the next few minutes of the film, the girl makes crucial errors. After the two find a watering hole, they decide to bathe in it and attempt to clean their clothes. It is implied that they do this before filling up their water bottle, since in the next scene, the boy complains about not filling up the water bottle. The girl also snaps at her brother, telling him to try and find his blazer because “We don’t want people thinking we’re a couple of tramps” (Roeg 23:14), even though, at this point in the film, there is no one to be found. A few minutes later, the girl tells her brother not to walk through the mud that was once their precious watering hole because it might ruin his good shoes. Apparently walking through the desert in dress shoes is not enough to ruin them.     


Education is the first notice (since the musical symbolism) in the film that separates the children. Right after they approach the Aboriginal boy, the girl asks him where they are. The boy yells at his sister to ask the stranger for water. She continues to get more and more frustrated when she realizes that the Native cannot understand her language and makes no attempt to try and build a connection so that he can understand her needs. It is not until the brother pipes up and motions for water that the Aboriginal boy understands and helps them. The girl’s education clearly has not taught her basic communication. It has separated her from her surroundings, engulfing her in a cultural and societal bubble. Privatized education, or just western-civilization-style education in general, leaves out basic common sense and survival. It would be more understandable to leave out survival skills if she was still in England, but now, being in Australia, with desert surrounding most points of advanced civilization, survival is key. Her logic is barely present. Education and knowledge are two entirely different things. The girl has her education, but she has no legitimate knowledge that can help her in situations outside of her comfort zone. She is more concerned about her social status than she is about survival.


Children learn what they live. Put kids in a class and they will live out their lives in an invisible cage, isolated from their chance at community; interrupt kids with bells and horns all the time and they will learn that nothing is important or worth finishing; ridicule them and they will retreat from human association; shame them and they will find a hundred ways to get even. The habits taught in large-scale organizations are deadly (Gatto).


We are all a victim of failed education. We are taught what the government wants us to know, but not what we necessarily need to know. “We are students of words: we are shut up in schools, and colleges, and recitation-rooms, for ten or fifteen years, and come out at last with a bag of wind, a memory of words, and do not know a thing” (Emerson). Once we are thrown out of the environment we know, all we can rely on is our past education and experience. Yes, the children’s actions were not thought through because in the world of film, actions are done up exponentially so to be obvious and prove a point. Once we are thrown out of our environment, we become the children. We become the didgeridoo of our own story.





Works Cited

Gatto, John Taylor. "Quotes About Education System (114 quotes)." Goodreads. N.p., n.d. Web.  02 Mar. 2017.

Emerson, Ralph Waldo. "Quotes About Education System (114 quotes)." Goodreads. N.p., n.d.  Web. 02 Mar. 2017.

Klein, Christopher. "DNA Study Finds Aboriginal Australians World's Oldest Civilization."  History.com. A&E Television Networks, 23 Sept. 2016. Web. 02 Mar. 2017.

"Didgeridoo Facts, Didgeridoo History & Aboriginal Music Knowledgebase | Didgeridoo Breath Australia." Didgeridoo Facts, Didgeridoo History & Aboriginal Music Knowledgebase | Didgeridoo Breath Australia. N.p., n.d. Web. 02 Mar. 2017.

Walkabout. Dir. Nicholas Roeg. Perf. Jenny Agutter, Jean-Luc Roeg, David Gumpilil. 1971. YouTube.

Tuesday, June 6, 2017

Stifling Society: Learning from the Uncivilized in WALKABOUT by Imani Hinson





Nature and the way things work outside of civilization is what promotes growth within individuals. Children exposed to the “real world” are given the opportunity to mature in ways that those who grow within civilization do not. Within western culture, children are accustomed to being cared for by their parents and accustomed to an education that makes them book smart; however, it is the interactions outside of the classroom that will stick with them and help them to learn real life. Being in nature promotes personal growth and helps young people mature into who they inspire to be. The separation from indigenous people and life outside of the suburbs of civilization hinders a child from maturing. We see the process of tearing down these dividing walls within the Nicholas Roeg's 1971 cult film classic Walkabout where civilized children are introduced to an unfamiliar world.

The film begins by defining a walkabout: “When an Aborigine man-child reaches sixteen, he is sent out into the land. For months he must live from it” (Roeg 0:08). The British children live in an Australian  city and are shown within their educational institutions where the girls are practicing vowel sounds and the young boys are also in school rote learning. Both the young lady and the boy are dressed in attire suitable for a formal school when the scene changes to their father driving them out to the Outback where it appears that they will be having a picnic. While the boy is playing with his toy gun and the young girl is setting up lunch, the dad begins to shoot real bullets at the boy. The young girl rushes over to protect both her and the younger brother, but is interrupted by the father lighting the car on fire and killing himself in the process. The young girl and boy now left on their own in the outback, must cope with living sans civilization, without someone holding their hand.



As the two young children walk through the Outback, they are not able to use many resources due to their lack of awareness of the numerous resources at their disposal. They see a black figure in the distance and they meet him, asking him how they can get water. The Aboriginal then uses his basic life skills to ensure that they are able to get water. He helps them get back to civilization, but not before showing them some of the land. This Aboriginal is on his walkabout, having to fend for himself, learning how to mature on his own without having supervision around or having someone baby him through every life decision. The boy just knows what he needs to do to stay alive, and he knows what he needs to do in order to make it through.

The film portrays many differences between civilized life and what is to be considered uncivilized life. It pans back and forth with jump cuts many times, contrasting Aboriginal and European lifestyles and cultural norms dedicated to each set; however, it does not show the difference between the education of the young and the ability to grow during educational years. In western civilization, we are taught arithmetic, reading, writing, social sciences, and natural sciences but learn nothing of the natural habitat or of the indigenous people living in nature. We are systemically taught how to be spoon-fed until around the age of 23 when we are given the chance to be completely independent, to find jobs and learn how to fend for ourselves in a world that is not too kind. “Conservative trends across western schooling contexts are signaling an explicit devaluing of social and moral learning within their official curriculum mandates” (Keddie 355). Western civilization grants students the opportunity to grow in a scholastic sense but not in a moral or social capacity.

In western culture we are educated on a surface level; teachers administer assignments and students are expected to know the information but are never given hands on experience. Paulo Freire discusses the banking concept of learning in western culture where “education is seen as a transaction in which teachers deposit knowledge in their students” (Beckett 50). The problem with this model is that students are never challenged enough to think for themselves or to learn things outside of what is taught within the classroom. Students lack the chance to grow on their own or think for themselves which hinders their development and their growth process. They are halted from learning because they are fed information and expected to regurgitate it when needed instead of having a hands-on experience with the real world.  Freire says that “it’s impossible for me to help someone without teaching him or her something with which they can start to do by themselves” (Beckett). When western culture frees itself of this notion that students are not able to think for themselves, only then will our children will be far more educated and able to grow at a much better rate.

In Aboriginal culture a walkabout is taken by a young person in late adolescence. Given the chance to live on their own for months, teens must learn how to hunt, cook and fend for themselves and yet make it out alive. This may seem harsh, but is that just the western civilized way of thinking? If civilized children were taught beyond the four core subjects, would they be better adapted to the world they will eventually encounter? The Aboriginal was able to take care of himself and two strangers because, from a young age, he was gifted the tools and knowledge of how to be on one’s own. He was not coddled by his parents or village and therefore was forced to grow up and become mature enough to be self-sustained.

Although children of civilized communities are well educated in terms of the core subjects, it is essential to realize all they miss out on by not being introduced to non-civilized life. “The children of civilized races are shut away [from] free contact with nature [and] grow up with undeveloped capacities” (Jones 493).This quote was taken from a study done by Martha Simpson, simulating the Aboriginal walkabout for kindergarten children in civilized Australia. These children were given an opportunity to expand their education outside of the walls of their classroom and learn what those who are living this life every day experience. By creating a simulated walkabout, the children are given an opportunity to have that growth period on their own like the Aboriginals who live there already have. The tools for success to living life can be given through the nature of being able to know what’s in one’s backyard. “Advocates believed that direct contact with nature fostered the instincts required for adjustment to the modern world” (Jones 493). Taking some practices from the Aboriginal people, western civilization would be able to mature if we were not afraid to take a peak in their back yards.


In addition, by showing children the idea of accepting diversity, they are able to grow up knowledgeable about the many different cultures in the world. In western civilization many young children do not know of diversity or are not willing to accept it until they are older. The maturity process that comes with being outdoors and experiencing other cultures helps to ensure that these children are equipped with the tools for success when viewing others. As KP said, these children are not able to get to the point where they “look at others and don’t see others as others” (Gordon). They are not at stage five and six of Lawrence Kohlberg’s theory of moral development. “In brief, for Kohlberg later stages were not just different than earlier stages; later stages were in fact higher, more adequate, preferable, more moral or morally better than earlier stages” (Moroney 362). “Most people never reach the highest stages (five and six)” (Moroney 362). These children must be given the tools and access to seeing diversity first hand.

In Simpson’s experiment “Aboriginal legends and cultural practices thus become teaching tools for white settler children, enabling them to learn from the bush” (Jones 494). These children were given the tools to accept diversity and appreciate other cultures because they were exposed to differences and different people at a young age. By teaching children in their early ages of learning to accept all cultures and people they are given a step ahead of others to reaching their full moral capacity.

Walkabout asks the question as to if our society’s education is really equipping us with the tools we need to succeed. Being a college student, growing up in the ideal public school education, there is so much more that is unseen and unknown of due to the fact that the education system has not gifted the facts about life outside of civilization. They teach the four core subjects and expect young adults to be able to know how to live their life. For western civilized children our walkabout does not start until 22 or 23 when we are set out on our own after college to find jobs, to find housing, to find ourselves, but that walkabout process of exploring and learning could be our guide along the way as we go through schooling. If children in western civilization were not so coddled by our society’s education system then our children would go far beyond what they ever thought of accomplishing.


Works Cited

Beckett, Kelvin Stewart. "Paulo Freire and the Concept of Education." Educational Philosophy & Theory, vol. 45, no. 1, Jan. 2013, pp. 49-62. Web. 28. Feb.2017.


Gordon, Paul Kirpal. 22 Feb. 2017. Class discussion.

Jones, Jennifer. "Nature Study, Aborigines and the Australian Kindergarten: Lessons from Martha Simpson’s Australian Programme Based on the Life and Customs of the Australian Black." History of Education, vol. 43, no. 4, July 2014, pp. 487-503. Web. 20. 2017.

Keddie, Amanda. "Prioritizing Social and Moral Learning Amid Conservative Curriculum Trends: Spaces of Possibility." Journal of Curriculum Studies, vol. 47, no. 3, June 2015, pp. 355-373. Web. 22. 2017.

Moroney, Stephen K. "Higher Stages? Some Cautions for Christian Integration with Kohlberg's Theory." Journal of Psychology & Theology, vol. 34, no. 4, Winter2006, pp. 361-371. Web. 22. 2017

Walkabout. Dir. Nicholas Roeg. Perf. Jenny Agutter, Jean-Luc Roeg, and David Gumpilil. 1971. Youtube.


Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Composing Culture, Working with Words and Images: An Interview with Writer-Critic-Educator Jody Swilky

 

KIRPAL GORDON: Such a pleasure to google you & find out all you’ve done since I last saw you in Albany, NY, in 1988. You were deeply into a Doctor of Arts degree in Critical Theory & with A Little Salsa on the Prairie: The Changing Character of Perry, Iowa, a documentary you recently wrote & co-produced, it seems your progressive approach to writing & teaching has come full circle. So what happened?




 

 
JODY SWILKY: After leaving Albany I took an academic position at Drake University in Des Moines, joining an English department  that intended to make a wholesale revision of its curriculum, moving from the old smorgasbord of categories structured by nationality and periodicity to one more informed by writing and reading as interdependent activities. Everyone would be responsible in varying degrees for teaching reading-and-writing intensive courses, and I was hired to teach a range of these courses, including “Freshman Seminar in Reading and Writing,” “Reading and Writing Poetry,” and “The Teaching of Writing: Theory and Practice.”  I was also asked to develop new courses in literacy, cultural studies, and writing. I was excited by this possibility, despite the fact that I was not thrilled about moving to Des Moines, a sentiment that has changed radically over the years. What attracted me was the fact that the department was interested in revising its programs and informing them by theoretical and pedagogical developments that recently emerged in writing studies and cultural studies—developments that dominated my graduate work at Albany.

 
I remember coming across an interview with Jane Tompkins that would be critical to the writing and teaching I wanted to pursue:

 
Although I didn't realize while I was in graduate school and for the first twenty years of teaching that I really aspired to be a writer more than a critic, now that I have made this crossover, I'm absolutely delighted. Let me say, though, that I think it's a false dichotomy: a scholar/critic versus a writer. It's a dichotomy we've all been sold in some way by the tradition we work in, and it's not useful to us anymore.

 
-from "Jane Tompkins and the Politics of Writing, Scholarship, and Pedagogy" Interview in JAC: A Journal of Composition Theory)
 
 
KIRPAL GORDON: I saw you erase such dichotomies with the journalism & creative writing students you taught at Arthur Kill CF, but it sounds like the SUNY-Albany program helped you combine your skills as a teacher-poet-writer-critic-activist in new ways.
 

 
JODY SWILKY: The graduate courses at Albany that had the most invigorating impact upon me were the courses that encouraged me to blur distinctions between writing and criticism, between aesthetic and critical writing. The English department at Drake seemed interested in people who had training in multiple fields or divisions within a discipline, who, for instance, had attended an MFA program and pursued doctoral work in writing studies or cultural theory, and who could contribute such training to the curriculum revision initiative. I wanted to teach courses and produce writing that was informed by tensions between and intersections of storytelling and rhetoric. I wanted my writing to take an ethnographic approach to studying culture, to study and use language in multiple ways that challenged traditional divisions between notions of the creative and the critical, between academic and journalistic writing, and between storytelling and critical analysis. After a few years of continuing to produce writing that served to preserve the conventions of genres, I embarked upon a decade-long collaboration with Daniel Mahala, another Albany grad, that produced writing that integrated storytelling and cultural theory, both our own and the work of other writers, illustrating how storytelling was being performed in multiple academic disciplines—in critical legal studies, in literacy studies, in anthropology, in the social sciences, and in literary theory—constructing a layered essay that advocated making story, testimony and the personal central to academic writing. Much of this writing captured the struggle to represent a fuller self, one that engages and exploits the conventions of academic writing while using language that enables writers to work towards their particular intentions.
 
The storytelling in a number of our essays took various forms, sometimes appearing as nonfiction, other times seeming more like fiction. Whatever writing strategy we employed, narrative translated abstract concepts into a representation of lived experience. The crossover that JAC promoted, what Tompkins advocated in her interview, enabled my collaborator and me to continue to build on the work supported by the doctoral program we attended, which attracted a group of people who were making crossovers: a published playwright working on a doctorate on avant-garde contemporary performance theory; an erstwhile journalist working on a theory of documentary filmmaking; an engineer writing a multi-genre dissertation, capturing, through poetry and prose, his interpretation of William Carlos Williams’ epic poem, Paterson; and a good number of card-carrying, MFA program grads engaged in projects concerned with theories of storytelling, composing, and collaboration—three activities that would begin to inform the work I produced after I left the program.
 
 
 
KIRPAL GORDON: Talk more about ethnography as a means or method to understand culture. What inspiration did you draw from that study?
 
 
JODY SWILKY: Modern ethnography appears in several forms, traditional and innovative. As an academic practice it cannot be separated from anthropology. Seen more generally, it is simply diverse ways of thinking and writing about culture from a standpoint of participant observation.

 
                        (James Clifford, The Predicament of Culture: Twentieth-Century Ethnography, Literature, and Art)

 
In 1988, James Clifford’s seminal study of Western ethnography was published, offering an important critique of how anthropology, travel writing, collecting, and museum displays of tribal art represented culture and cultural groups. Clifford offered an alternative practice which, as the quotation just displayed suggests, called for a more inclusive perspective on who might study culture, and through example, how writing might include the voices of those being studied while serving their interests.           

 
That same year, The Thin Blue Line was released. Errol Morris’ groundbreaking documentary depicts the story of Randall Dale Adams, a man convicted and sentenced to die for a murder he did not commit. Adams’ case was reviewed and he was released from prison approximately a year after the film’s release. He told reporters,

 
 “The fact that it took 12 and a half years and a movie to prove my innocence should scare the hell out of everyone in this room and, if it doesn’t, then that scares the hell out of me.”

 
The integration of an investigative perspective with the aesthetics of filmmaking is the hallmark of Morris’ documentary, which weaves a thread of reenactment, of dramatic storytelling, with interviews, plus a multitude of images—of faces, newspaper headlines, street, maps and buildings—presented through imaginative camerawork and pacing—zooming in and out, spanning landscapes and rooms, capturing and dispersing colors, and moving to the hypnotic effects of Phillip Glass’s score. The film lets us know we are in the presence of filmmaking. The results were art and social justice. 

 
Clifford’s and Morris’  work opened up possibilities for studying culture, particularly who contributes, and what materials and representational strategies are used, to construct and capture their storytelling; and in distinct ways, their work complemented how writing and filmmaking can serve the social interests of the individuals and groups being studied.

 
Over the past decade, within writing studies, there has been increasing concern about the relationship between words and images, what Kristie Fleckenstein has described as  a shift from “a language-centric to a polymorphic literacy,”  a response acknowledging that “meaning shapes itself in response to the dictates of different media, modes and contexts of representation,” what she deems a necessary response in this post-Gutenbergian, image-dominated age, in which we are subject to an unending stream of information-melding words with mental, graphic and verbal imagery. If we fail to account for how imagery affects our understanding of experience, Fleckenstein argues, we limit how richly we can understand the world that impinges on us. This suggests a new possibility for composing culture—a transformation from creating images only through language to working with multiple kinds and modalities of images—graphic, verbal, and mental—the product being a text that does not abandon language but rather incorporates multiple semiotic systems.

 
Possibilities can represent opportunities as well as challenges.  Since Clifford’s book and Morris’ film were released, academics who previously wrote about culture, primarily for a specialized audience, have begun to work in documentary film.

 


KIRPAL GORDON: How did your interest in making documentary film come about?  Did you seek out the work of other academics?

 

 
JODY SWILKY: Since I began work on a documentary in 2005, I have attended dozens of screenings by first-time, academic filmmakers, who had little or no formal training in filmmaking or prior experience adapting their writing for a non-specialized audience.  These events have caused me to think more about the challenges of transitioning and adapting, including working with multiple semiotic systems, negotiating the interests and desires of different audiences, and establishing ethical participant-observer relationships with the culture being studied.

 
A significant challenge has been moving from working with images through language to composing culture through multimodal texts, moving from  reading and hearing language to considering how language works with visual images and sounds—and how that might affect the listener-reader-viewer.  


 
I remember in the late 1970s and early 1980s theories of image-making that stirred my interest. There was Pound’s misreading of the Chinese, captured in “The Chinese Character as a Medium for Poetry,” which might have had the linguistic substance wrong, yet his theory represented a powerful way of thinking about constructing images: placing perceptions side by side, as if they were ideograms.




 
KIRPAL GORDON: Would you give us an example from your own poetry?



 
JODY SWILKY:
Shared Music

 

They sang the same songs for years,
 
in the dark, across a continent,

sometimes awake at dawn,

humming to a frosted window.

 
 

Years would pass before they danced

to ballads in a shadowy room,

careless of stepping

on each other’s toes.

 

The muted trumpet lingered

and something burned their faces—

the remains of an incredible embrace,

the body speaking a startling language,

 

the way the woman who just left her lover

and now arrives home,

suddenly stops smiling, then smiles again,

surprised by her daughter’s laughter.

 
 
 
The final stanza of the poem, read line by line, embodies how the body speaks a “startling language.” Collectively, the lines of the final stanza create the stages of the experience—departure, arrival, readjustment, and surprise. A sequence of perceptions, of scenes, each ordinary in itself, yet as you read through them, each can carry the residue of the previous images, accumulatively creating new meaning.
 
 
KIRPAL GORDON: To make the old new, to express the “startling language” hidden within the everyday that yields those haiku-ish, satori-like eurekas—you’ve wrought the best of Pound’s misreading of Fenolossa. You’ve made good on other influences, too, yes?
 
 
JODY SWILKY: Another theory of image-making that influenced my work in language was that of the deep-image aesthetic. I was taken by the notion of a poem playing states of being against each other, or building and possibly provoking a more imaginative state of consciousness. Some poems I wrote about seeing and the imagination attempted to exploit a tension between common visual images and images that aren’t of the natural world. 
 
 
KIRPAL GORDON: Would you illustrate the tension in a poem?

 
JODY SWILKY: An example appears at the end of this poem:

Animation

 

A man walks through a district
 
of perfume and dress shops,


 
and wherever he turns,
 
whatever his eye might spot
 

 

through the sunlight, shadow,

and damp odor of traffic,

 
 

he sees only the cold beauty

of women in windows.

 
 

If a mannequin leans,

offering her perfect hand,

 

 
or the woman sitting in bed

whispers a few words,

 
 

he knows, as the body absorbs

sight and sound, they're calling him.
 

 

And if they stand as stiff as plaster,

he thinks each inviting gesture

 
 

is saved until the streets empty,

until his fingers touch luminous glass,
 

 

leaving a handful of kisses

on their billboard smiles.

 
 
 
The closing image of the poem works with what can be seen, a common image in advertising, and what must be imagined, an almost magical gesture of affection for one’s own creation, the animated inanimate object—the mixing of language of intense desire with that of simulated beauty.

 
KIRPAL GORDON: Perhaps on the other side of affection for one’s creation there’s a loneliness inferred in those last lines as well: is the fetish defeating the real thing? Is kissing the “cold beauty / of women in windows” a sad confirmation that he can’t get no satisfaction, that he’s hooked on image? The ad’s reflection in glass lends this reader to re-think ideas about beauty, flesh, desire, artifice, propaganda, advertising, manipulation, the politics of the female body & the separation from nature/woman inherent in your cityscape. After reading your collaborations with Daniel Mahala, I find you’re packing a punch akin to this Deep Imagism in your essays.
 
 
JODY SWILKY: The hybrid collaborative essays were enabling new territory for critiquing culture, and although they used storytelling to capture institutional, programmatic and disciplinary situations, they represented a divided writing identity, what seems to me more critical than creative.  Later, when I found myself working in a multimodal medium (film), I sensed a more balanced construction of aesthetics and critique, which emerged by working with multiple forms of images, created through the linguistic, the visual, the aural, and most important, through the integration of the three—through how they  present image, story, critique and argument—and consequently produced a critical aesthetic through the composing of culture that worked against a divided disciplinary identity. A writer-critic, if you will. 



 
I have been considering these challenges of representation and collaboration ever since I worked on A Little Salsa on the Prairie, the documentary I wrote and co-produced. What I mean by representation is the way one or more modes of symbolic representation are used to construct the story and the perspective(s) from which a story is told; in other words, issues of composing and storytelling which often blur or are interdependent. 
 
 
 Vivian de Gonzalez Transcript
 
 
You know, when I got here to Perry, ah, and people would look at me they thought, oh, you know, she doesn’t understand English, she’s Spanish speaking, she, you know, she doesn’t understand, but not knowing that, you know I am, I did speak English, and I am an American and um, I’ve, I’ve had to have proved myself not only once but twice because I have to prove myself not only to my own people but to the Anglo population too.  

 
Now I would like you to watch and listen as Vivian speaks: Go to 

 
 
 
You know, when I got here to Perry, ah, and people would look at me they thought, oh, you know, she doesn’t understand English, she’s Spanish speaking, she, you know, she doesn’t understand, but not knowing that, you know I am, I did speak English, and I am an American and um, I’ve, I’ve had to have proved myself not only once but twice because I have to prove myself not only to my own people but to the Anglo population too. 
 
 
When I first read Vivian de Gonzalez’s account of how she was perceived after her arrival in Perry, I had not seen film footage of her interview. My response to the transcript was that there was an important message in her explanation that addressed a fundamental problem in understanding the relationship between recent Latino immigration and the identity of New Iowans, as well as the consequences of this misunderstanding. I initially decided against using this footage to open the film, however, because I felt unsure about the syntax and how that might come across to viewers. But when I viewed the footage and listened to the speaker—after seeing her face and body, and noting her body language; after hearing the register of her voice, the pace and emphasis of her phrasing; and imagining music accompanying the footage—I  had a different response. Her presence as speaker made the written text particular, personal, as she infused the text with pauses, emphasis and emotion. When I read the transcript, I could construct an image of her, but now her visual presence affected any image I previously had. My method became: listen, look and read.
Along with the challenge of the medium for composing culture, there has been the matter of approach. When I consider the structure of A Little Salsa on the Prairie, the challenges of representation and collaboration become entwined. Moving from the past to the present, from reconstructing history to documenting a community-wide dialogue, we intended that the role of residents would be enhanced as the story unfolded, and that through this process, the competing interests and needs of the community would emerge.



 
The first chapter, which offers a historical view of Perry through a perspective that considered the relationship between ethnicity, industry and immigration, was constituted largely by archival images and scholars’ voices. The ensuing chapter focused ONLY on the residents’ views concerning the dramatic culture change of the 1990s, when Latinos came to work at the meatpacking plant and settle in the community.

The next segment documents a dialogic process during which residents met for five consecutive weeks in small groups,

followed by a community-wide forum, to discuss the challenges the transformed community faced. Through the structure of the story, Perry’s residents took a more active role as actors in telling the story. At the same time, from the footage we shot and the archives we visited, we selected the materials and we designed their arrangement, and thus the needs and interests represented were not the result of our negotiating with the community. While two rough cuts of the documentary were screened for several community groups, and their feedback was taken into consideration, throughout the production process, we did not work with members of the community on determining the specific interests and concerns that would inform the film. Thus, it was our representation of “their interests and concerns.”
 
 
 
What might have been the story if we had regularly negotiated the content?  We came closest to this approach to collaboration in the coda to the film. Using Vivian de Gonzalez’s and Father David Polich’s uncut representations of the religious ritual, replacing the voiceover with the voices of two residents, each having a distinct story informed by their connection to the ritual; consulting with them regarding the B-roll to complement their narratives, we constructed the film’s coda. The process was collaborative and the coda became a metaphor for collaboration, integration. That was closer to what the politics of the both the film and filmmaking could have been.
 
 
 
Despite the limitations of the project, I must say that it was an incredible experience, as far as what I learned about writing grants and securing resources, the tensions of studying and working with a community of people, the tensions and revelations of collaborative work with an artist situated outside academia, and the challenges of constructing a product that integrates language, images, sound, and so on.

 

 
KIRPAL GORDON: What pieces of advice would you give to someone just starting out?

 
JODY SWILKY: The most important thing about the grant world is learning formulas and expectations.    
 
 
 
The spectator-researcher subjectivity is much more complex, particularly negotiating the fact that people who you care for are subjects of your work, and you must hone your care and concerns for them in relationship to a story you are striving to construct. That’s why in an interview format (section II of the documentary), we let Anglo and Latino residents report on how they responded to the dramatic culture change in the community, then followed these interviews with a section shot more in cinema verite format, with the camera rolling on the study circle groups, with people not as poised, not as careful about expressing their views on immigration, assimilation, and culture change.
 
 
 
Then there is the tension of working with someone whose purposes and rhythms differ from those of us trained and housed in academia. Based on my limited experience, the academic and independent artist can have divergent priorities, and different pressures can affect attention to phases of the project, including research, writing, shooting footage, and editing. There are also different realms of knowledge: for example, a videographer who works produces work for the general public might think differently than an academic accustomed to writing for a smaller audience. It certainly was a lesson in understanding a new form of otherness.


 
I found myself in new territory in my work, and, dare I say, opening up new territory for humanists at Drake. I was the first member of the humanities faculty to get the highest level of support for a multimedia project ($15,000) from Humanities Iowa, a state organization affiliated with the National Endowment for the Humanities. The film project also received additional state funding ($6,900) from Iowa Arts Council, and from a private foundation, Bock Family Foundation ($7,500). Then there was the strange world of soliciting funding form individuals and industry.
Commencing in the fall of 2006, I began a five-year period of traveling and lecturing. There have been about 40 public screenings of the film, on campuses and in communities, and I have spoken at many of these events. The film has been aired several times on Iowa Public Television and was shown for two years on The Documentary Channel which is available through Direct TV. Finally, and perhaps most important to current and future research projects, since 2008 I have been invited to give seven presentations on the effects of recent immigration on Iowa and the nation. The majority of the invitations have come form universities and colleges, among them Technologico de Monterrey (Guadalajara, Mexico), Manhattan College (New York, NY), SUNY at Geneseo (Geneseo, NY), Saint Mary’s College (Moraga, CA), and St. Thomas Aquinas College (Sparkill, NY).

 
KIRPAL GORDON: Yikes, Jody, this sounds like the antithesis of the stodgy academic life! You’re connecting with so many communities, you’re constantly synthesizing feedback, you’re uniting people of a similar karass, you’re engaging with one of our country’s biggest issues & you’re making a difference to people who have not necessarily paid your employer any tuition.

 
JODY SWILKY: If I consider the historical trajectory of this project, if I think about its evolution from applying for grants to the recent  presentation of the documentary in Mexico to an audience of hundreds, many who have personally known someone who has been part of the phenomenon over the past two decades of changing rural communities throughout North America, I can say I have been engaged in what I think is a vital discussion across our nation—how welcoming you will be to the new immigrants who are changing our country. The disparate responses of people who have attended screenings has engaged me in numerous discussions about divisive issues—what it means to think of a human being as “illegal,” what should be the responsibility of the government in promoting or restricting immigration from south of the Rio Grande, the importance of precluding, restricting or enabling paths to citizenship, and how fear and the unknown inform contrasting perspectives on welcoming new residents of the U. S. These exchanges have taught me the importance of using the documentary to promote discussions concerning the historical causes of recent demographic change, the struggles and challenges immigrants endure, and the contrasting consequences of recent immigration for communities across the nation.



 
I often find my thinking aligned with a point that Sonia Nazario  raises in her national bestseller, Enrique’s Journey, concerning the problem with the way we debate and legislate immigration: no matter how legitimate, campaigns and law have had a “corrosive side effect” (xiv). Recent immigrants’ presence in the United States is deemed either good or bad, reducing these individuals to a “cost-benefit ratio,” downplaying or erasing the reasons for, as well as the struggles and effects of, immigration. While immigrants’ stories about culture change, assimilation, and the future frequently reflect the thinking that informs public debate, these narratives simultaneously speak about experiences and identity in ways that complicate and challenge the way public debate has defined the effects of immigration. Thus, in our attempts to understand the meaningful possibilities for reform, we need to look not only at the thinking that informs public debate and produces legislation, but to the culture change in communities and the stories their residents tell of the specific effects immigration has had on the quality of life—for themselves and other residents of the community. That was a primary objective of the documentary.

 

KIRPAL GORDON: So how has all this time in Iowa changed you? What I mean is: don’t hak me a chaynik; you’re no less intense now!

 
JODY SWILKY: When I came to Des Moines in 1988, some of my students and some locals considered me a somewhat abrasive, perhaps too intense, Easterner, something of an intruder from the East. My character and personality frequently clashed with the dominant mores and attitudes. In one sense, this is a generalization; at the same time, however, there were enough statements in student evaluations and reactions from people in the community to suggest to me that I was somewhat of an outsider. I have changed, and people who get to know me, at Drake and around greater Des Moines, have shown willingness to accept my contrasting ways. This sense of being “somewhat different” has been useful to me as I presented the documentary across the state, for it has helped me gain insight of our fears of otherness, whatever it might be, whether it is among ethnic groups or my own intimate circles. So I have learned more acceptance of the elderly Anglo woman from rural Iowa, who has lived in a homogenous community all her life, and then experiences her community undergoing rapid ethnic diversification. What a challenge for her being confronted by dramatic culture change that can initially present too much of the unknown. I have learned to be more attentive to, and accepting of her fears, of the challenges she faces. It reminds me of a poem that I wrote decades ago:









Nothing but Image
 

If I am amazed by anybody

it’s the bum on 34th Street,

who bears the abuse

of executives and salesmen,

who smiles at secretaries

rushing past his ragged presence.

 

 

My father once told me:

Don’t trust these men with no purpose.

They seem harmless, he said,

but look hard and you might see

your own fallen image

fading across their faces.

 

 

So I turned my head and walked away.

But one night, in winter rain,

an old man mumbled,

spare change...

and I stared into his bloodshot eyes.

 

 

Water dripped down his face

like sweat, and his busted nose

broke the dark,

perhaps the proud wound

of a forgotten middleweight fight.

As I handed him some coins,

didn't he lower his head,

bless me, call me brother?

 

 

Now I love to look for those

whose faces and clothes deceive us,

this bum standing up

to the insults of the crowd,

who leaves us shaking our heads

and talking to ourselves

like men lost in the heart

of New York, in an almost memorable past.

 
 
 
KIRPAL GORDON: You’re bringing me back to the 34th Street where we first met---in publishing---in 1979 & now all these years later you have created the life that poem suggested was possible to you, a life of looking closer, of not being afraid to discover yourself in the face of the other & sharing the methodology & the results.


 
JODY SWILKY: The transitions I have made in my writing and film work have been possible in part because I have worked for several decades in an institutional department that within a few years after I arrived let go of artificial and unproductive divisions such as writer vs. critics, literary vs. popular,  high vs. low culture,  and aesthetic vs. political. There has always been a visible group of people within my department and the broader institution that supported and encouraged work that did not preserve artificial boundaries that limited the possibilities for expression and creation, among them the role of writer-critic. (And there have been resources and awards for connecting writing to teaching.)
 
 
In the early 1990s, soon after I arrived at Drake, a coalition of senior and junior faculty advocated throwing out the well-established curriculum, those containers informed by periodicity and nationality, replacing this common curricular form with a more rhizomic structure—all courses connected by the interdependence of reading, writing, and recent developments in theories of discourse and culture, and courses branching out and building on each other. We underscored students becoming close readers and serious writers, rather than exposing them, primarily, to periods of literature and particular author-figures.

 
We intended the emphasis on reading and writing to engage students in multiple genres of writing, to engage canonical and non-canonical texts in the same course, and to gain a sense that close reading and serious writing is valuable in the here and now, as well as preparation for life and career after graduation. Having gone to graduate programs that enabled me to work in multiple genres of writing, often for the same course, I valued such experience and applied it to designing courses that asked students to produce similar projects in courses such as “Reading and Writing Place,” “Storytelling as a Social Practice,” “English in America,” “Reading, Writing, and Making Documentary,” and “Writing within and against Academic Discourse.”

 
I believe that students taking classes through my department are being given the opportunity to read and write in ways that encourage creatively critical attitudes toward texts and the world.   What students miss in coverage, they get double in opportunities to learn to be close readers of texts, and to try out and develop different approaches to writing sanctioned within and outside the academic institution.

 
It is probably a commonplace today to claim that meaningful teaching requires that teachers take a philosophical attitude towards their work. To be philosophical about teaching means to be aware of what one is doing and why, which necessitates having, what Cy Knoblauch and Lil Brannon, two of my comp mentors, have described as “an exploratory and reflective attitude towards ideas, issues and questions” pertinent to how people learn and how they develop as learners. In addition, a philosophical stance towards pedagogy requires that teachers gain awareness of the values, attitudes and beliefs that inform different teaching methods—those contrasting philosophical perspectives “on language, on meaning, on communication, on learning, and on the ways of assisting learning.” Awareness of the philosophical dimensions of teaching, Knoblauch and Brannon contend, makes instruction “sensible and deliberate.”
 
 
 
I encourage the students I work with to take an attitude towards learning similar to the philosophical stance that Knoblauch and Brannon advocate teachers adopt towards pedagogy. I ask them to work towards developing this stance as readers, writers and speakers because learning is a process of exploring issues and ideas, coming up with provisional understanding and reformulating beliefs through thinking, which is not likely to happen when teachers locate themselves in the educational process primarily as figures who profess knowledge that students passively internalize. What more meaningfully serves the goal of students developing a philosophical attitude towards learning is a pedagogy that underscores reading, writing and speaking as means for producing and revising thinking, that makes the classroom a social space in which students are expected to be active participants who collectively interpret, discuss and debate issues, and that positions the teacher in different roles necessary to facilitate and complicate such learning.          
 
 
The complications and difficulties my teaching poses for students have to do as much with matters of (un)familiarity as with ideology. Students I have worked with at Drake have had a variety of educational experiences, and they exhibit different degrees of interest in and resistance to the demands of my teaching. I have found it counterproductive to perceive students to be generally anti-philosophical. Rather, it makes more sense to think about their differences and potential as well as their limitations, and therefore recognize that only some students present extreme resistance while others already show interest, and many have the potential to become more philosophical about learning.
 
 
The most meaningful way I know to counter student resistance to my teaching is for students to see themselves change as readers, writers and speakers, and in so doing, attain some genuine understanding of the value of their learning. I ask them to engage in the processes of revision and re-visioning. The first activity focuses on deepening one's interpretations and arguments; the second, on seeing how they might interpret and argue differently. I ask them to write and respond to each other’s work each week, often for each class, and to understand that their individual and collaborative work is produced and shared so they can see different possibilities for understanding texts and the world, become more insightful at interpreting their own and other students’ writings, and appreciate how thinking can change and deepen through hard work. As someone responding to what they say and write, my responsibility is not only to offer questions that help them deepen their thinking and consider others ways of understanding what they write about, but to provide questions and commentary that help clarify for them the meaningfulness of any genuine changes in their thinking and writing.          
 
 
I am not suggesting that the method I have outlined nullifies student resistance to developing a more philosophical stance towards learning. A pedagogy that asks students to become more responsible for their learning requires that many of them unlearn the way they have become accustomed to performing in the classroom. However, my experience leads me to believe that the different degrees of confusion and discomfort students experience can eventually be perceived as productive if they receive support and gradually recognize they are gaining something significant through their struggles. They will always need to know that what they say matters, but it is reasonable and necessary to increase expectations for their persuasiveness as they move through this transitional process. That is why I believe in starting out where students are, rather than where they “should” be, and gradually complicating the challenges of learning. And those students who eventually perceive their abandoning of ingrained behavior as more than simply giving up how they have learned to perform, they will have begun to understand differences in the values, attitudes and beliefs that inform teaching, and thereby have become more philosophical about learning.

 
KIRPAL GORDON: One could also say that you’re facilitating students in their building “a room of one’s own,” midwifeing their birth into a fuller self, what once was called soul-making. You’re reminding me of that Cassandra Wilson line from “Running the Voodoo Down,” “In this quiet place I own, worlds are born.” So how can Giant Steps reader see your film, stay in touch with all of that you do & when you will next be in their city or town?
 
 
JODY SWILKY:  I get what you are saying about those lyrics.
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Thanks so much for giving me the opportunity to catch up with you and share with your readers the projects I have been engaged in for several decades.
It was a pleasure.